Please Review My IELTS Task 1 Essay

Hi, this is my essay for IELTS Writing Task 2. I would be grateful if I could get some feedback from teachers here. Please review suitable grammar sentences and vocabulary if somes are wrong.

And my idea about reasons and solutions for this essay is suitable ?

Thank you very much for reading my essay.

TOPIC:

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.

What are the reasons for this?

How can people research this?

My essay:

It is true that many people are curious about things that happened in their house in the past and start to explore this. There would be some reasons and ways that they reach their achievement of finding out the house’s history.

There are some reasons why people want to find out the history of their accommodation. Firstly, they can have benefits about properties such as money, valuable things in the house. For instance, a person buys a house and finds something that can be bought at a high price. Secondly, because of some inaccurate exhibits, owners of their settlements discover about the time of house that they can live in or whether they can use their house as their property. For example, they can buy a settlement that they only live in for an arranged time period and cannot sell. However, they don’t know through the old owners or agency.

It has several methods to investigate their living accommodation. Firstly, they can research every nook and granny in their house. For example, they can detect a mystery room that has profitable things such as money. The second way is that they can hear information about the house from neighbors because the old can be well-informed about the past of the house. For some legal issues, owners of the houses should go to the authorities to research the history of the house. Moreover, the Internet can be a good way of finding that but there are some shortening about positions which are remote.

In conclusion, people are inspired to find the history of their house caused by finding a worth or the lifespan’s time. Some effective measures to explore the history can be collecting information from neighborhoods or the internet and researchment at authorities if it is related to the law.