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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature.

Answer:

The line graphs illustrate the proportion of households with technological appliances and the number of hours spent doing household chores in a country from 1920 to 2019.

Overall, it is clear the number of home electrics exhibited escalating trends. In sharp contrast, the percentage of household chores time per week declined steadily

In the first 60 years of the period, the percentage of household electrical equipment significantly rose. Specifically, the number of refrigerators rose dramatically and reached a peak of 100% in 1980. following the same pattern, the proportion of vacuum cleaners and washing machines shot up at 90% and over 60% respectively. By contrast, the number of hours of household chores per week considerably fell from 50 hours in 1920 to 20 hours in 1960.

The next 39 years experienced a gradual growth of the proportion of washing machines to over 70% in 2019. And the percentage of refrigerators remained 100%, the same with vacuum in between 2000 and 2019. Whereas, during 1920 and 2019, the hours of housework per week still dropped slowly.