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Lê Tuấn Anh Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please review my IELTS Task 1

The line chart illustrates the proportion of people who had access to the Internet from 1999 to 2009 in three countries, namely the USA, Canada, and Mexico.


It is noticeable that the percentage of the population who used the Internet in these nations increased over the 10-year period. Overall, a lower percentage of Mexican using the Internet in comparison with that of American and Canadian.


In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in the USA was about 20% and it was slightly higher than the figure for Canada and Mexico, which stand at around 10% and 5% respectively. In the following 4 years, in 2005, there were upward trends in the number of Internet users in Canada and America, they were nearly 70% of the population for both countries. At the same time, the figure in Mexico was the lowest, just approximate 30%.


In 2009, the percentage of Internet users was highest in Canada. Almost 100% of Canadians used the Internet, compared to about 80% of Americans and only 40% of Mexicans.

  

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htm If you are writing about a diagram or figure, please attach an image. We cannot evaluate your essay if we can't see what you are writing about. n Anh The line chart There is no such thing as a line chart .

  • htm If you are writing about a diagram or figure, please attach an image.
  • We cannot evaluate your essay if we can't see what you are writing about.
  • n Anh The line chart There is no such thing as a line chart .
  • There is a bar chart, a pie chart, or a line graph.
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If you are writing about a diagram or figure, please attach an image. We cannot evaluate your essay if we can't see what you

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I am sorry. Maybe a mistake when I uploaded this image for line graph

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The line chart (wrong word. This is not a pie chart or bar chart.) gives illustrates the proportion of people who had access to the Internet from 1999 to 2009 in three countries, namely the USA, Canada, and Mexico.


It is noticeable that the percentage of the population

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