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The graph and the table show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in the three major cities.

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The line graph illustrates the mean temperatures per month, whereas the table demonstrates the hours of sunshine on average in a year in London, New York, and Sydney.

Overall, it can be seen that, although London and New York become warmer; but the temperatures start to decrease near the end of the year, and the alternative trend is true for Sydney.

Looking at the line graph first it is clear that, in January the climate condition in London is higher than New York with figures slightly under than 10 and around 5 respectively. As the temperatures in both of these cities is continue to rise, although it becomes higher in New York than in London in the middle of the April, this figure go up gradually and reachs at its peaks in July before showing a downward trend until December with a lower temperature in London than in New York.

Turning to Sydney, the febricity starts to decline from February to July, and then rises back at the end of the year with the lowest point just under 15. From the table, it is observed that New York has the highest number of hours exposed to sunshine (2535), and that is slightly higher than that of Sydney. However, total hours of sunshine in London is the least and that is 1180 hours.