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The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over. What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation?

The predictions show that in most developed countries, the birth rate will decline over the next 50 year. It is clear that the problem will definitely start to impact on the anxiety and concern over the future of the planet and economic prospect if these forecast come true.

First of all, the decline of birth rates lead to destruction of life systems in most developed countries. For instance, it reduces a number of young people, fewer workforce which lead to a lot of problems for the economy. Therefore, economic problems will begin bigger step by step and at the end, it will be the collapsed of the country.Moreover they might have to receive many migrants from other countries which could have its sub-problems such as cultural threats and an increase in the crime rate. At the same time, there are several solutions to these problems that are appropriated in the world. For example, the governments can attract young people from developing countries to reside in Europe with the aim of filling the gap. It effected to create some scholarship for students in other countries with article work for them in several years. Unfortunately, this might impact in to the economic countries and make worse the relations on the cultural base.

Second idea might regarded as negative, but it can effective, is reduced pensions. It may lead to commotion. However, it is one of the most suitable ideas in this situation. Reduce pensions will help the economic countries have enough money to deal with the decline of the bird rate over the next half of a century. In that time, governments can decide some solutions which the most effective increase in the percent of young people.

In conclusion, the drop of birth rate definitely impact the future of the developed countries in all the planets. The governments need to act as soon as possible to reduce the decline of its. It is very challenging and should be considered more seriously by the experts.