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The maps depict the transformations in the art gallery ground floor from 2015 to the current time.

A quick overview of the figures reveals that there have been some new facilities to the left of Entrance Hall, whereas the facilities on the right side remain unchanged.

As can be seen from the maps, Exhibition Room 4 has been destroyed to make room for Children’s Area and Tempolary Exhibition which have the same size. It is also noticeable that Vending Machine has replaced Gallary Office with its open area. That open area becomes more precious when the reception has its new location in the centre of this place.

It is worth mentioning that a gallery shop is located where a café used to be. However, this shop is much smaller than Café, which has allowed Stairs to move to the left to install a lift next to Exhibition 3. Finally, all the exhibitions on the right edge have not changed so far.