Please review my ielts essay. Topic : Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that non-domesticated animals rarely have enough space for them to settle down in this globalized and cramped world and people should not spend money on protecting wild animals .I completely disagree with this statement.

There are many issues on animal extinction that our authority figures should pay much more attention to such as over-hunting, urbanization. If human do not find a way to tackle these problems, several of wild animals may be on the verge of extinction. This will make the animals lead a terrible life. As a result, this will lead to the loss of biodiversity, lack of nutrient components which we gain from animals' products such as pork, lamp, beef. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we make the most of land or every last square metre of land in order to feed the world's population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with other animals on this planet.

I also disagree with the ideal that there is not worthy of protecting animals. It is commonly said that preserving natural habitats of wild animals can either improve the natural balance of all life on the earth or have a good morality. Also, we still rely on animals's products which are greatly nutritious and beneficial to our well-being. For example, we can make use of elephants in zoos or in circuses both for entertainment, relaxation and in medical field to produce medicine. In fact, many countries has been investing in medicine field allowing scientists or doctors to do a lot of research on animals such as rat, dog so as to invent different kind of ways to cure people or bring the dead people to life.

In conclusion, we do not have a right to force any living-life forms to die and I believe that we should make an enormous effort to prevent them from dying out.