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The line graph compared how many tourists (in percentage) that visited four different places of interest in Edinburgh over a thirty-year period from 1980 to 2010.

Overall, three destinations were aquarium, zoo, catsle had an enormous fluctuation in percentage of tourists. However, the percentage of tourists of festival had the most insignificant fluctuation.

The percentage of tourists who went to aquarium rose significantly from 20% in 1980 to about 45% in 1985 then went down rapidly to 20% again in 1990. It had a small fluctuation between 1990 and 2000 then decreased fast. The percentage of tourists who visited castle had an upward trend between 1980 and 1995 and increased considerably from near 30% in 1985 to over 40% in 1995. But from 1995 to 2010 it kept falling down. The percentage of tourists who went to zoo kept going up and down consecutively until starting to have an upward trend from 2000.

The percentage of tourists who paid a visit to festival gradually decreased from 1980 to 1995 then slowly increased in 2000 and stayed the same. The percentage was always not higher than 30%.