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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table indicates the figure for consumer expenditure on distinct products in five nations in the year 2002.

Overall, people spent most of their money on Food, Drink, and Tobacco, making up the largest proportion in these five countries. On the other hand, Leisure and Education contributed the lowest percentages in terms of consumer expenditure.

The percentage of consumers spent on Food, Drink, and Tobacco in Turkey was by far the most significant compared to other nations at 32.14%, nearly doubling that of Italy at 16.36%. The second most considerable proportion in terms of people spending money on foodstuff went to Ireland at 28.91%, while Sweden had the lowest percentage concerning these products. The figure for consumer expenditure in Italy for Clothing and Footwear was the greatest proportions at 9.0%, while in Sweden it was the lowest. The proportions of people spending money on these items in Ireland, Spain and Turkey were 6.43%,6.51%, and 6.63% respectively.

The percentage of consumers expending on Leisure and Education in Turkey accounted for more than 4%, making up the highest percentage in this column, following Turkey was Sweden with 3.22%, Italy with 3.20% and Ireland with 2.21%. Spain had the least proportion in terms of Leisure and Education at just under 2%.