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The tables below show responses to a questionnaire given by two groups of people (club members and the general public) who showed their opinions about a new theatre. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.



The tables indicate the results of a survey in terms of assessment from people who were divided into two groups including club members and the general public about the new theatre.


Overall, Information about the plays/performances to the public is the most highly-ranked. In contrast, production quality and facilities in the theatre received the same amount of negative responses.


First of all, a significant proportion of people rated ‘Excellent’ for information about the play/performance to the public. Satisfactory opinions had a considerable difference with the percentage of club members being double the general public. It is noticeable that the number of respondents choosing ‘Poor’ is the lowest among the three sectors, with 5% and 2% respectively.


Looking at the remaining results, club members more greatly appreciated production quality and facilities in the theatre which were higher by 3% and 20% than the general public. Club members and the general public consisted of the similar proportion of selecting ‘Satisfactory’ with both sectors, while the general public were less satisfied with the facilities by 4%. The rate of choosing ‘Poor’ are in the same level, the striking point is that there is a huge gap of 24% between the share of club members and the general public in experience with the new theatre

  

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The tab le indicat e s the results of a survey in terms of assessment from people who were divided into two groups including assessing people’s ( club members and the general public ) about level of satisfaction with the a new theatre. Overall, there was a high degree of satisfaction, especially from club members. Information about the plays/performances to the public is the most highly-ranked.

  • The tab le indicat e s the results of a survey in terms of assessment from people who were divided into two groups including assessing people’s ( club members and the general public ) about level of satisfaction with the a new theatre.
  • Overall, there was a high degree of satisfaction, especially from club members.
  • Information about the plays/performances to the public is the most highly-ranked.
  • In contrast, production quality and facilities in the theatre received the same amount of negative responses.
  • Regarding production quality, 70% of club members and a similar 67% of the general public rated it as excellent, while only 13% of the former group and 15% of the latter said it was poor.
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The table indicates the results of a survey in terms of assessment from people who were divided into two groups including assessing people’s (club members and the general public)

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