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0979209074 Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please review my IELTS essay ( task 1 - band 6.0)
i'm so sorry teacher. I will rewrite them. Just because I thought my last paragraphs were wrong, I wrote the new ones. 
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No problem. Use those two proofread paragraphs as a start and post the revised essay below.
- No problem.
- Use those two proofread paragraphs as a start and post the revised essay below.
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No problem. Use those two proofread paragraphs as a start and post the revised essay below.
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