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Please review my IELTS essay

My essay:

The given charts make a comparison between four different nations, namely Portugal, New Zealand, Canada and Norway in terms of the percentage of using land.

In general, it is plain that Non-agricultural land occupy the highest rate in each countries.Furthermore, apart from New Zealand, the proportion of pasture land is lower than that of Arable land in Portugal,Canada and Norway.

Looking at the charts more closely, it can be observed that most of the land used in those countries are Non-agricultural, which account for over 90% in both Canada and Norway.Besides, Canada and Norway use just two and one percent of their land for pasture, respectively.

Moreover, at just under 60 percent, the type of Non-agricultural land represented a substantial percentage in Portugal as well as New zealand. However, New Zealand distributes relatively evenly non-agricultural land and pasture land, the latter of which make up 48 percent of land in the country. All the nations have a tiny fraction of arable land except for Portugal,where 34 percent of the land is arable

  

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