Please review my IELTS essay

Topic: In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.

What are the reasons for this?
How can people research this?

My essay:

Some event of history always makes scientists to confused. There is a trend that number of people increasingly figure out what happened to the house or building they living in at present time. One of the reasons is their curiosity or maybe they thing that they could find something that hidden in this place and with the technological developments such as internet, recovered images, they can easily find evidences about that.

People who is curious person always ask questions leads to how long the place they living was established or what did the house’s appearance before they lived here. More specifically, in many social networks, a lot of videos representing the resident finding a treasure or a hidden basement which belonged to those previous owners. Some equipment was found, it is assumed that it belongs to the artifacts that were lose during the war. Leading to increased suspicion of inhabitant that what can they find in their residence. Moreover, the building they living was built for what purpose, it could be a hospital for injured soldier or school for children.

The method that they can investigate about the place’s record is internet. This can answer almost the questions above. On the internet, they can search about the event, the time of building and the purposes of their place. For example, they just put the address and by one click all the information which they are finding will be appeared. Not only those data but also, they can know the previous owner.

In conclusion, discovering the past of house or building is interesting for many people in some countries. Besides, there is a lot of activities attracted some such as collecting antique stamps.