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The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates the honey bee’s life cycle from the females’ laying eggs to becoming the mature honey bee in about 34 to 36 days.

The life cycle goes through four main stages, namely: eegs, nymph, young adult and mature honey bee. For example, in the first step, females give birth to 1 or 2 eggs every three days. In the subsequent step, after 9 to 10 days, the eggshell separates before eggs evolve into nymph and experience 3 times of molting as it grows to young adult honey bee. Finally, young adults take 4 days to become a mature honey bee. The process of being born and developing of this species happens continuously. Interestingly, thanks to this producing, the ecosystem can stay balanced.