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The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The 3 pie charts shows number of journal articles read at an Australian university by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers per week.

Overall, majority of the PhD students have read 12 or more articles, followed by junior lecturers who have finished reading 6 to 11 articles finally most of the students have read below 5 articles.

In detail, the first pie chart shows number of journal articles read by all students where 67 % of them read 1 to 5 articles, 21% read 6 to 11 articles while only 12% read 12 articles

Second pie chart illustrate that 80% of PhD students finished 12 or more articles and only, 15% read 6 to 11 articles and only 5% finished upto 5 articles or less.

Third pie chart depicts that 75% of junior lecturers read 6 to 11 articles while 24% have gone through 12 or more article leaving only 1% who completed reading upto 5 articles.