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Phạm Mai Phương 11b9 Posted 4 years ago
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Cat Ba National Park is a popular tourist destination familiar to both Vietnamese and international tourists. It is situated on Cat Ba Island, which is 120 km from Hanoi and 20 km east of Hai Phong. Especially, Cat Ba National Park is endowed with both tropical forests and coastal waters with white sand beaches abundant natural resources, beautiful landscapes, and many kinds of rare animals and plants. The total area of the park is 15,200 ha. Besides, there are about 300 species of fish, 40 species of animals, 150 species of birds, and 620 species of plants in the park. Moreover, the national park has many special historic features, especially 6000-year-old stone tools made of human bones. Therefore, I hope to have the opportunity to go to Cat Ba National Park one day soon.

  

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m Mai Phuong 11b9 Cat Ba National Park is a popular tourist destinatio n, familiar to both Vietnamese and international tourists. It is situated on Cat Ba Island, which is 120 km from Hanoi and 20 km east of Hai Phong. Especially, In particular, Cat Ba National Park is endowed with both tropical forests and coastal waters with white sand y beache s, abundant natural resources, beautiful landscapes, and many kinds of rare animals and plants.

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  • m Mai Phuong 11b9 Cat Ba National Park is a popular tourist destinatio n, familiar to both Vietnamese and international tourists.
  • It is situated on Cat Ba Island, which is 120 km from Hanoi and 20 km east of Hai Phong.
  • Especially, In particular, Cat Ba National Park is endowed with both tropical forests and coastal waters with white sand y beache s, abundant natural resources, beautiful landscapes, and many kinds of rare animals and plants.
  • The total area of the park is 15,200 ha.
  • Besides, there are about 300 species of fish, 40 species of mammals, animals, 150 species of birds, and 620 species of plants in the park.
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Ph?m Mai Phuong 11b9Cat Ba National Park is a popular tourist destination, familiar to both Vietnamese and international tourists. It is situated on Cat Ba Island, which is 120 km from Hanoi and 20 km east of Hai Phong. Especially, In particular, Cat Ba National Park is endowe
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