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IELTS writing task 1The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The picture illustrates the differences of a park between the years 1980 and now. The park's shape has changed, and new things have been added to the park and a few things removed.The park in 1980 had a gate, and it had an entry-exit path. It had flowers on both sides of the park. After years park has been improved, and a few items added. The new things are chairs, desks, and barbecue. However, trees are still there, and space for new things expanded.Flowers on the right side of the park were removed. Instead of them, the playground was added to the park, making a space for kids to play. The flowers from the other side replaced with bush. The pond is still there, and now there are four benches near the pond.The park still has trees with more roads for people and new equipment like a barbecue and playground. It becomes a modern park that kids love without flowers.

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The picture (Be exact. There are two maps.) illustrates the differences of a park between the years 1980 and now. ~~The park's shape has changed, and new things have been added to the park and a few things removed.~~

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The park's shape has changed, (That is not true. The park's shape is rectangular, and it is the same size. ) and new things have been added (That is very uninformative. It is not a main feature.) to the park and a few things removed.

The park in 1980 had a gate, and it had an entry-exit path. It had flowers on both sides of the park. After years park has been improved, (That is an not very informative. ) and a few items added. (Repetitive.) The new things are chairs, desks, and barbecue. However, trees are still there, and space for new things expanded.

Flowers (Not very good. The flower gardens were removed. Flowers die very quickly and are removed continuously) on the right side (use compass directions for maps) of the park were removed. Instead of them, the playground was added to the park, making a space for kids to play. The flowers from the other side replaced with bush. The pond is still there, and now there are four benches near the pond.

The park still has trees with more roads for people and new equipment like a barbecue and playground. It becomes a modern park that kids love without flowers. (That is your opinion. Some kids like flowers, too. Do not write opinions. Just describe the map.)

Compass directions for maps - north, south, east, west, northeast, northwest, southeast and southwest. There are even more precise directions such as north-northeast.

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Sample essay:

Paragraph #1: Describe the figure:

The two maps depict the changes made to a park between1980 and the present day.

Paragraph #2: Write about the main features (most significant observations)

Overall, the size of the park did not change, and the pond with benches on the west side remains the same. However, there were new recreational facilities built on the east side, and two new entrances were added.

Paragraph #3 Focus on comparisons.

In detail, in 1980, the two entrances to the park on the east and south side were gated. The gates have been taken down, and two new entrances, on the north and west sides, were constructed, creating an intersection of the four roads in the center of the park. The two flower gardens are gone; the large one in the southeast corner is now a children's playground, and the smaller one in the southwest corner is covered in bushes. On the northeast corner, the area for trees is reduced in size and a picnic area laid out. Families can bring their picnic tables and chairs and cook on a barbecue grill. The northwest corner remained empty.

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