PLEASE REVIEW MY IELTS ESSAY

Instruction:

A student Oolong is F1 covid 19, he sat in the hall B in Capstone defense day which resulted in people in hall B can be F2 covid 19.
Send a message to the students sat in the hall B of that day to tell them stay home for safety, use different tones:
1. You are the Uni office to send a formal email to those student (may be F2)
2. You are a SE student sat in the hall B that day, drop a brief note on messenger to your friends, tell them to take care of their health...
3. You are boss of Oolong - send an text message to Oolong F1 - tell him to work from home & update this health condition
50-100 words/each message

My answers:

1.

Dear students,

Before the complex problems of Covid, the FPT university office must inform you that a student Oolong is F1 covid 19, he sat in the hall B in Capstone defense day which resulted in people in hall B can be F2 covid 19. So if you have come to that day, please reply this email and don't leave the place of residence.

Beside, we will support you by online class during isolation.

Notes:

- Students see the schedule on FAP and check email before class start of every slot.

- Get link from Email to join your class

- The attendant is carried out by currently rules.

Guide to study from far away, students will take from the file attach.

All the best for your learning,

Sincerely,

The FPT university office.

Download file attach: Click here

2.

Hi you guys, i have problem with Covid 19 that i am F2. So who have met me since last Sartuday, please don't leave the place of residence. I will update my health condition for you guys. We will meet and yolo around Sai Gon each other after this isolation. See you soon guys.

3.

Dear Oolong,

Before the complex problems of Covid, i am really sorry this had to happen that you are got F1 covid 19. Maybe you must be stayed to work from home that protect you and the people around. We need to take action together to reverse Covid 19. Beside, would you like to update this health condition to the company? We are so glad if you will get better soon.

Sincerely,