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Cases of bullying in school are increasing and worsening.

What do you think are the causes of this?

How can we tackle this issue?

It is true that many bullying cases are happing consecutively, and this leads to a severe impact on victims' psychology. While this is a serious problem, it can be solved by a good education and suitable interference by the schools.

The main cause of bullying is that students are easy to access to the internet and social media, where there have been many violent acts that are attractive to students. In social media such as Facebook, Youtube, there are many movies related to fights, these are really appealing to students to watch and stimulate them to imitate these acts. Therefore, they practice these violent actions in real life without adults' supervision of other students, particular are weak students. For instance, more than 50 percent of bullying cases spring from the imitation fight movies of students, thus, the victims suffering have a serious problem in their psychology such as depression, which is a disorder of psychology.

However, there are solutions to this problem. The best way to deal with this problem would be that schools should teach students to behave politely and apply punishments to students who bully other students. Once schools bring in an order of bullying, all students have to abide by it, and that results in less bullying situations. Besides, schools should teach students the importance of being respectful to others. By organizing extracurricular sessions about the bad effects of bullying and the benefits of having good behavior, students will know and understand those, thus, they will be good people in society.

To sum up, it is clear that bullying cases are much more than before and worsening. Nevertheless, this issue can be solved by restrictive measures and valuable lessons from school.