Please review my IELTS essay

Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
What is your view? Explain your position.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

In this day and age gender is appropriate for the profession is a hotly – debated topic that often divides opinion. Many people impose backward ideas about regarding the gender division is only suitable for certain occupation, I am in favour of the view that people can freely choose in term of employment.
There are many reason why people believe that It is necessary to divide the profession according to gender. Most men do not have the skills and dexterity to work in certain employment and some women do not have the physical attributes to work in accurate work. For example in nursery school, the babysister are all the weaker sex because female have better about child-rearing like feeding, changing diapers and coax the baby to stop crying. Also a wad of career need physical strength such as construction worker, fireman,… and they are suitable for breadwinner.
In contrast, I maintain that it does not matter that people ought to do a job they like regardless of gender. Both gender can bring slightly innovations and positive perspectives for further profession development. For instance, nowadays a bulk of women choose careers that require a lot of strength and are life-threatening such as policeman or fireman but not because of that they are a burden to anyone and they can problem solving better than men. In addition, many people are more open to men than in a career related to cosmetics and fashion such as designer or beautician, they can have a more objective taste and view of fashion and beauty.
To summarize, although I acknowledge that many people agree with the view that need to choose a career that is suitable for the gender, I would argue that It is necessary to remove the inherent stereotypes of society, have a more objective view of gender equality in the profession in order to develop that industry.