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International entertainers including sports personalities, often get paid millions of dollars in one year.

In your view, with widespread in the world, are these huge earnings justified?

In the modern life, the amount of salary which is paid for celebrities has a remarkable progress meanwhile the povetry is spreading in some underpriviledged nations. Many people believe that the talented artirsts and athletes deserve the handsome salary for their efforts yet some of them deny that this is justice and merit because of the widespreading shortage in some places of the world. In my opinion, although there are some factors should be considered carefully, it seems balance when comparing with residents under poverty on account of some reasons.

Firstly the huge such incomes of celebrities are totally legal and worthy for their unending perseverance. As is observed that competiton is constant thus each super star or sportsperson have to work hard and apply theirselves to develop real skills and abilities. Even they have to follow a strict regiment to keep fit and have several severe injuries during the training process. Secondly, not only do celebrities bring reputation to the entertainment industry in their contry but also boost their nation’s economy. By becoming a brand ambassador or a brand representative for some national products, they help brands to promote sales through celebrity endorsement campaigns and fill up the national budget. They even partner with some organsitions on the tourism campaigns to attract many foreign tourists visting to their hotspots. For this reason, their efforts are worthy of the enormous incomes. Furthermore, some of them are also the goodwill ambassador who assist international aid organisations in raising people’s awareness of social issues due to celebrity’s influeneces. When look at this illustration it is clear that megastars are part of our community and they provide the poor with some support in many ways. Hence obviously, the salaries paid to those public figures should be justified.

On the other hand, it is a biased treatment with the vital sectors’ experts. While they attempt relentlessly to generate the valuable contribution which make our world run smoothly, the person who become famous almost overnight just have some complicated relationships with an A-list celeb or show their face in tabloids or gossip columns. For example, the doctors spend at least ten years of grueling study and internship and their work saves lives, Especially in The Covid-19 pandemic, they are true philanthropists and the monument of courage. Yet, the professionals and experts are overlooked despite their meaningful and critical contribution to the world. In addition, a such huge amount of money which is paid for notorious person is unreasonable. The people who achieve fame without really working for it can generate billions of dollars from their scandals meanwhile the number of people who suffer from famine, unemployment are the predominant part of our societies. Thus it is not judicous to impose such enormous budget in entertainments.It should toward the relief for people who are in need of it.

In conclusion, the megastars and athletes should receive the generous salary because of their efforts. However the goverments and non-government organisations should pay a great attention to the povetry issue.