Please review my IELTS essay.

Topic:

The map shows the center of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

My essay:

The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant in the center of Paris.

Location 1 is located northwest of the center. This place is east of the Bir-Hakeim Bridge and the Seine River. It can be a good view of a restaurant. This place is also west of a park and Maritime Museum, which has 8000 visitors each day. In addition, the Aquarium is east of this location that 2000 tourists visit it every day. These visitors can go to the restaurant and eat lunch there. The opposite side of the river, there is a sports center in exactly the same position as location 1 and has 500 clients per day. So, The company can easily attract them.

Location 2 is approximately is south of the center. It is between the Art Gallery with 750 visitors per day and a park. The Eiffel Tower is west of this position and it is very close to it. It is a big point for the restaurant because 16000 tourists go to see the tower and the restaurant can skillfully amuse them. Moreover, the location has a great perspective of the river on it.

Both locations have a good outlook, but location 2 is able to attract more than people because the Eiffel Tower is near it.