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Javadtavakoli Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please review my IELTS essay

Topic:The table shows the number of foreign visitor to 7 countries. Summarize the information by selecting the reporting and make comparison where relevant.

My essay:

The table describe the millions number of traveler to seven countries. In addition the millions number of tourists from UK and USA, who went to so-called countries is illustrated.

Overall, France is the most popular country among visitors, and Australia, is visited by the lowest number of passengers. The highest number of American went to Canada and UK people, was more eager to travel to France.

France catered 53 millions people, which 7.4 millions of them was from UK while just 0.1 million Americans went there. Indeed France was the most unpopular country for people of USA. Australia was the most unpopular country for tourists and make hospitality for just 3 million people, which 0.6 million of them came from USA and UK, in the same proportion.

Canada hosted the highest number of Americans, 12 million, while totally, 15 million people went there. In addition, Mexico was the second popular country for tourists from USA, though just 0.1 million visitors from UK went there, in fact, for British tourists, Mexico was the most unpopular country.

  
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