Please review my IELTS essay

Subject: Please review my IELTS essay
Topic: The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.

My essay:

The given pie charts describe the percentage of area of the world and percentage of world population belonging to different continents.

Overall, Asia consist of the maximum percentage of world land area and also contain the more than half of world population. Furthermore, Antarctica is the emptiest continent and Asia is the most congested area of the world.

Although more than 60% of world population live in Asia, it just include less than one third of world land (30%). Likewise, 12 percentage of world population is for Europe which is greater than percentage of world land belong to this continent. Apart from Asia and Europe, for other continent percentage of world area is greater than percentage of world population.

Oceania has the minimum percentage of world land area, and include just 0.5% of world population. In addition Antarctica with about 9% of world land area has not any inhabitant. Africa in both categories is located at the second seat by 13% world population and 20% world land area. South and North America also contain 12 and 16 per cent world land area respectively which is about twice times of their percentage of world population.