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Task 2: People Living In Large Cities Today Face Many Problems In Their Everyday Life. What Are These Problems? Should Governments Encourage People To Move To Smaller Regional Towns?

Nowadays, there is a big problem that is the overgrowth population in big city, this will affect the citizen daily life. In my opinion, the migration to other areas in the best solution that government should consider.

It is clear to see that, people who live in the large city have face with many problems. The main problem that people who live in the major city is the living cost. The living cost in the city is higher than in the small town. Inhabitants of the city have to pay high price for rentting house and utility bills, so many people have to live in poor conditions in shed, garages, park,…Moreover getting a job in the city is very difficult. Many citizens can’t find a job, so that the rate of umemployment is vey high. This is very dangerous, because many of people could engage in criminal activities as a way of living that make the crime rates increase.

However, there is a solution that government should apply to deal with this problems. The policy of encouraging resident to live in the small town is the best solution. If many people moved to rural area, the pressure of major city would be reduced, finding a job is easier than before, the traffic congesion, the social issue are solved. To do that government should invest money in rural infrastructure and facilities to attrack many people. Moreover individuals who willing to relocate to rural area are given a finacial support.

In conclusion, nowadays living in the major city is difficult and citizens are face with many problems, however I believe that government will encourage them to move to small town.