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Why do you want to study at VinUniversity? Why should VinUniversity admit you?

I have always dreamt of becoming a doctor-someone who can alleviate the pain and suffering of others. Therefore, I believe that Vinuniversity will equip me with the education I need to fulfill my dream. Vinuniversity's curriculums are designed by Ivy League university, which will enhance my knowledge in Health Sciences and develop my teamwork skills. Additionally, becoming Vinuniversity student gives me the chance to practice with cutting-edge technology that improves my practical skills better than the traditional way. As a Vinuniversity wannabe, I'm convinced that I can contribute to the university in many ways. First, with my communication skills, I believe that I can set up a small group to practice our speaking skills at the university. Moreover, my wish to become a doctor has driven me to read some scientific research about several ailments, therefore, I'm convinced that I can share some of my collective knowledge with other students.