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Topic: Some people think that adults should learn practical skills by themselves, while others think they should learn from teacher. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
The population of the world is increasing day by day, lead to the higher demand of people's abilities especially in practical skills. While some people think that adults should learn it by themselves, others think they should learn it from teacher.
Practical skills should be learnt at first from people who is rich in experience. Acquairing knowledge which was accumulated by our forefathers and use in daily life is the first basic step adults have to accomplish. Furthermore, rely on these experience, instead of trying to find existing things, adults can prevent from several mistake that should not be commited.
On the others hand, life skills also should be learnt by adults' selves. In my opinion, teenagers nowadays can update information easily and fastly, so that there are several things in modern can not be taught by teacher. Grown people have to find and study those new things, make it become their, in order to improve their skills in daily life.
In conclusion, even by learning themselves or being taught by teacher, practical skills of any people is important. Therefore, adults should enhance their life skills in both ways.
Top answer
The population of the world is increasing day by day, lead (wrong form) to the higher demand of people's abilities especially in practical skills . (The first sentence does not have much relevance to the topic. ) While some people think that adults should learn it (wrong pronoun) by themselves, others think they should learn it from (missing word) teacher.
- The population of the world is increasing day by day, lead (wrong form) to the higher demand of people's abilities especially in practical skills .
- (The first sentence does not have much relevance to the topic.
- ) While some people think that adults should learn it (wrong pronoun) by themselves, others think they should learn it from (missing word) teacher.
- (Missing thesis statement.
- The instructions say: give your opinion.
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