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TOPIC: Tell us about the sport you have played and present the state of professional sport as well as the role of sport in society

I am intested in sport especally football. With the passion, I have taken part in quite a lots of football teams also tounament. It spread on different levels from classess to schools. Sport brings me so many profits, i keep a good healthy by practicing football with my friend, moreover, through football we can connect to people and improve team-work ability. Suprisingly, football makes it easier to familiar to anyone so that it really make sense.

Now let’s talk about the state of professional sport. Sport bring reputation and money for athletes in many ways. For the subject of sport with many followers, The value of tournament is extremely enormous, the winner altheles may be millionaire after a night. The advertising contract, representative of brand contract also brings so many money even more than tournament prize for atheletes.

Sport plays a significant role in society. In business, sport make a lots of benefits and it is just not simple concept, it has become a valuable bussiness. Commercial value of the league is considerable and copyright of the league becomes a race of media firm also Televison company. In field of entertaiment, sport help us relax and feel comfortable with watching. Moreover, sport appreciate value of group, effort and many other right things. Each of sports has a distinctive trait from that we can practice and get better and better day by day. In conclusion, sport make a positive impact on society from perception to action and it is unnecessary for human and development of the world as well.