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Topic: The charts below show the reasons why undergraduates and postgraduates choose to go to Parker university.

Essay:

The two pie charts explain some reasons that undergraduates and postgraduates decide to apply Parker university. There are several reasons make both groups choose to go to the university. However, there are some differences about the level of consideration here.

In terms of similarities, it is noticeable that for both undergraduates and postgraduates, the highest percentage says that the reputation of the university brings them most consideration: 35% for the undergraduates and 42% for the postgraduates. Cost is also very important for both groups: the second largest percentage of both groups mention cost as making them enter to Parker university.

Turning now to the differences, many undergraduates regard personal recommendation as extremely important: 18% of them say this make them think about applying to the university. While this reason just be considered by 6% of postgraduates.

The two remaining reasons, location and availability of accommodation, are in the same range of 6% - 8% in both groups when choosing to go to Parker university.