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Rav purple 622 Posted 7 years ago
Letter Writing

PLease review my essay. Thank you so much

To

The principle

Delhi university,

110030

From

Ravish kumar

ECE 3rd year

sub: regarding 5day leave letter.

dear sir,

I ravish kumar student of this collage 3rd yr ece, i want to say that i'm participate the live project in NIT CALLICAT,

robotic and nano technlogy . in this project we need 5th day holiday to attend the live project.

It will be grateful to you, if you grant my request for leave from date mention above, as it was not possible to attend my classes due to my project.in my team 4 mamber are present as i mention the bellow name of our group mambers.

Thank you for your concern.





gyes suggest me what are the wrong. wether it is correct.

  

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Hi Ravish, and welcome. Note that I have split your post from the thread you tagged it onto. In future, please start a new thread for your essay, letter or question.

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  • In future, please start a new thread for your essay, letter or question.
  • --------------------------------------- 1- Is this just practice, or is it a real letter/email?
  • 2- Are you sure the title of the addressee is correct?
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Hi Ravish, and welcome. Emotion: smile

Note that I have split your post from the thread you tagged it onto. In future, please start a ne

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FIrst, "i" is the ninth letter of the English alphabet. It is a letter, not a student. It cannot want things or think about things.

Second, you have misspelled many words. Use a dictionary.

Third, every sentence must begin with a capital letter.

Fourth, proper names (names of people, colleges, streets, cities and countries) must begin with a capital letter.

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