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The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

The maps illustrate the transformation of Dubai over the period of decades.

Overall, it is clear that the city has become more developed compared to it in the past.

In the past, the city was covered by sand and there were few buildings. The only feature which has been remained the same is the clock tower .

The most noticeable change is the street has been more crowded with a significant increase in the number of transports .There has been more and more skyscrapers which have been constructed around the city. Although trees located along the side of the road have been removed , some of them have been planted around the edge of the clock tower.

  

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ductam5656 Could you add more details for my essay please? It is not long enough. I have a better idea.

  • ductam5656 Could you add more details for my essay please?
  • It is not long enough.
  • I have a better idea.
  • Pick a Task 1 topic from a legitimate source.
  • This Task 1 example is bad.
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ductam5656Could you add more details for my essay please? It is not long enough.

I have a better idea. Pick a Task 1 topic from a legitimate source. This Task 1 example is bad. That is why you are having difficulties.

These are typical IELTS Task 1 samples where the infographic consists of maps over time. Yours is nothing in comparison.

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