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In recent years, the rapid development of technologies has been resulted the degradation of traditional cultures in an inevitably way. Although several arguments concern that technologies and traditional cultures are not compatible, I personally support the idea that there are various ways to help traditional values integrate to modern technologies.

There are numerous reasons that modern technologies can engender the degradation of cultural values. At first, the growth of digitalization has been provided human the opportunity to approach a great amount of knowledge quickly and conveniently since the Internet was launched 25 years ago. However, numerous people have been confused by this huge amount of information, causing them to find other interesting subjects, such as films, TV shows and modern lifestyles, instead of finding traditional cultures. Additionally, various people have been severely addicted to unfriendly digital contents, especially electronic games, and they do not spend an adequate attention to other values as a result. As a compelling illustration, history, which is a beautiful subject teaching people both national and international cultures, has been disliked and rejected by a large number of Vietnamese students because they like to learn about game online and pop music instead, according to a survey of Vietnam National University.

However, it is not difficult to direct the public attention into traditional values. Attaching traditional values into modern digital products can be considered as a reasonable solution. For example, the game Three Kingdoms based on a history period of China and containing several cultural values has been created a trend of studying about history and traditional cultures in China since its launch in 2009. Furthermore, the idea of celebrating traditional festivals in schools also appears reasonable, because it can attract more attention of both students and teachers. For example, many cutural clubs in the University of Social Science and Humanity was launched by students, who assert that they are interested in Vietnamese cultures since participating former festivals at school.

In conclusion, I think that the development of technology plays a negative role affecting traditional cultures. However, these downsides can be resolved effectively, helping technologies become more compatible to traditional values.