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Please Review my essay for IELTS Task 1

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task


The graphs depict the proportion of pineapple exports worldwide by the top three producing nations in 2009 and 2019, as well as a breakdown of each pineapple's cost to the buyers in 2019.
Overall, there is a huge contrast in the exportation features of pineapples in two countries A and B. While we saw an increase in the fruit sales of A and C from 2009 to 2019, B's revenue diminished through the 10 years. What is more, "distribution and retail", "profit", and "taxes" are what contribute most to pineapple price in 2019.
To be specific, the proportion of pineapple exported by A in 2009 almost quintupled that of it in 2019, from below 2 million tons to more than 10 million tons. On the other hand, the amount of pineapple sold to foreign countries by B shrunk by approximately 3 million tons between 2009 and 2019. For country C, there was no major difference in its trading profits in that decade.
The price of the pineapple was mainly affected by "distribution and retail"(35%), "profits"(18%), while "producer" and "export costs" only played a minor role (roughly 5%).

  

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