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IN THE PAST, MANY PEOPLE HAD SKILLS SUCH AS MAKING THEIR OWN CLOTHES AND DOING REPARIS TO THINGS N THE HOUSE. IN MANY COUNTRIES, NOWADAYS, SKILLS LIKE THESE ARE DISAPPEARING.

WHY DO YOU THINK THIS CHANGE IS HAPPENING?

HOW FAR IS THIS SITUATION TRUE IN YOUR COUNTRY?

In earlier times, people willingly learned skills such as repairing their household items or making clothes. And they used to practice it to their benefit. Some would even proudly talk about it in their friends and family get togethers. such were the part time activities in those past years of human race.
Though all these skills had their advantages but it also required some free time. Also, there were very less opportunities to pass leisure hours. But in this modern age, an average person is busy enough that taking some time our for even learning such skills is not possible. From childhood to adulthood and later, day-to-day routine tasks take so much efforts and time that these extra skills are nearly abandoned. Besides one reason being non-availability of free time, interest in these activities has lost its wya. there used to be a charm in designing own clothes, mending household items or even repairing furniture. But modern inventions, career building, social activities etc has played its part in this downfall.
In my country, except a few towns and villages, people are reluctant to pursue these past practices. Fast paced life style, interest in other curricular activities, less learning opportunities for these dying skills, and no encouragement for it is dominant around here.
I think no matter how busy our life is, benefits from these skills are plentiful and one should try to practice it atleast to keep it alive.

Thanks in advance.

Jay