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TOPIC: Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Other disagree. Discuss both view and give opinion.

There are some thoughts that to be both successful in economic and have a green environment at the same time is not an impossibility for a nation. It is true that many countries nowadays are doing well with the above requirements. However, in my opinion, it can be argued that it is unlikely occurred in some nations.

On the one hand, there are various reasons support to the statement why having strong economic and green environment is possible. Firstly, in some nations which have profound finance can probably generate the eco-friendly products and transportations. In order to that, there would be no longer appearance of pollutants. For instance, Germany are on the process of making cars which powered by electronic battery. Secondly, developing countries have more opportunities to be a pioneer of some kind of new eco-friendly products that make them gain a large amount of money, boost up their financial profit. Others nations at that time must be considered to follow that strategy and method to develop the life quality of the residents. It would create much more green and wealthy countries.

In spite of those beneficial ways, there are some reasons why a nation can not have enough ability to follow up both economic and environment. Firstly, producing activities require plenty number of products to satisfy the consumption. So companies often ignore the environmentally friendly principles, create many gas emissions, contaminations,... In addition, resources exploitation is the activity which is considered as the most harmful thing to the environment and people nowadays are wasting lots of natural resources. It leads to many problems to the Earth and directly affect to human's health.

In conclusion, while some nations possibly increase both finance and environment in some particular ways, i believe there are still difficult to make those requirement balanced.