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The map illustrates the changes which occurred in a beach area named Portland from 1950 until 2007.
It is clear from the diagram that grassland and industrial area were replaced by shops, a cinema and houses through the period shown.
In 1950, there are many buildings in the northwest of map, but they are demolished a part and replaced by a park and swimming pool. Sea located in northern map in 1950; however, it was narrowed by the northern toward extension of road along with the appearance of Yacht Marina.
The year 1950 saw the existence of a car park in the east of map whereas it was destroyed and built by apartments in 2007. Noticeably, the fifty-seven-year period witnessed a dramatic change in the southwest of map in which a large grassland was replaced by shops and a cinema. Likewise, a grassland was disappeared, and shops combined with houses were constructed in southeastern map in 2007.
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The map illustrates the changes which occurred in a beach area (wrong word) named Portland from 1950 until 2007. (There is one diagram. ) It is clear from the diagram that (Words like "clear, evident, notable, and obvious" are opinion words.
- The map illustrates the changes which occurred in a beach area (wrong word) named Portland from 1950 until 2007.
- (There is one diagram.
- ) It is clear from the diagram that (Words like "clear, evident, notable, and obvious" are opinion words.
- Do not write opinions in Task 1.
- Besides, these words do not describe the figure.
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The map illustrates the changes which occurred in a beach area (wrong word) named Portland from 1950 until 2007. (There is one diagram. The diagram has two maps.)
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