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Topic:

All children should be given a free laptop when they start high school
Do you agree or disagree?

Essay:

Young students should be provided laptop by their high school without any additional cost when they start high school. I completely agree with this opinion because it reduces the need of original books and make use of digital applications to improve learning experience.

Due to the development of technologies, there are many online applications provide people a method to digest books on digital devices. Thus, students can completely use e-books in lecturers instead of original books. As a result the demand of physical books that students are required to bring along with them to school will drop significantly. Young students are no longer need to carry alot of belongings to school instead just a laptop. This movement has already being applied in 80% private schools in Vietnam, their students are less likely to have to carry with them a heavy backpack to school in comparision with their peers in other schools.

There are many applications for helping conduct education and children can access those applications via their personal computer. While not every parent can afford a laptop for their children, high schools should provide their students one without charging them in tution fee. Because this can improve the teaching and studying experience which leads to better performance of students. Teachers can provide materials and notes on a centralized application from where students can access and study from it. Moreover, students can revise all of the provided resources at the end of their term to prepare for the final test easily. As a result, these applications can positively change the experience of learning of young students and improve student's performance. For instances, in several private high schools in Viet Nam, more than 80% of students are happy with the implementation of technology in education and have higher grades in comparision with themselves in the past.

In conclusion, personal computer should be provided to young students at the beginning date of their high school by the educational institution. As a result, students and teachers completely get rid of original books in their lectures and they can easily apply e-learning method to help students perform better in school.