Please Review My Essay
Hi teechr,
Prompt: Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class.
Do you think it is the best way to deal with a disruptive child in the classroom?
What other solutions are there?
Essay:
Children's issues at school are not uncommon. Teachers have to deal with different types of children every day. Their behaviors vary between a quiet child, a hyperactive child, or a disruptive child. Some think that teachers should be allowed to ask a disruptive child to leave the class. They see it as the best way to deal with the problem. I disagree with that.
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The text above is just the introduction. I think this way is really good to improve writing. Please review it. Thank you very much.
Top answer
Hi Moonrise, When we write an essay, the introduction is ironically the last part we write, not the first! We usually jot down ideas, take a position if necessary (based on those ideas), write the body paragraphs, then the conclusion, and finally the introduction. So, let's try to do that here too.
- Hi Moonrise, When we write an essay, the introduction is ironically the last part we write, not the first!
- We usually jot down ideas, take a position if necessary (based on those ideas), write the body paragraphs, then the conclusion, and finally the introduction.
- So, let's try to do that here too.
- Start with the body paragraphs.
- Post below.
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Hi Moonrise,
When we write an essay, the introduction is ironically the last part we write, not the first! We usually jot down ideas, take a position if necessary (based on those ideas), write the body paragraphs, then the conclusion, and finally the introduction. So, let's try to do that here too. Start with the body paragraphs. Post below.
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