Please review my essay

Topic: Describe your ideal house.

My essay:

A house

I would like to live in a stunning house by the sea in Nha Trang. My house will be big and spacious, and it has two floors, a swimming pool and a backyard surrounded by many kinds of trees and flowers. In front of the house is a big silver gate, and when entering the gate, one will see a rocky pathway leading to the house’s main door, and a lovely carriage that is decorated with colorful ribbons. In the middle of the house, there is a medium hall that has many exquisite pictures hung on the wall. On the left of the hall is a modern kitchen full of electrical appliances and convenient tools. The living room is on the left of the hall, this is a place for the family to have meals and to meet customers. And on the second floor, there are four bedrooms and a large balcony. From the balcony, It’s easy to see the whole view of the house and the brilliant night sky. In the backyard, there an also a small wooden house for the family to drink tea and relax. I like to live in a house like this because it brings me comfort and entertainment.