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Topic : Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of cars than advantages. Do you agree or disagree? 200 -250 words

My essay:

In today’s world, cars have become the most commonplace transportation vehicle. Despite some people dislike car for particular reasons, the majority consider car as one of the most convenient and advantageous things has been innovated. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the latter idea and this essay will illustrate my point of view.

Firstly, cars are convenient and appropriate for everyone. Cars reduce time to travel to different places and provide space for many people. Although cars are seemingly out of weight, they can travel at high speed according to its massive engine and its shape like a shelter also provide adequate space for groups of people depending on type of cars. Due to its high speed, it takes less time to travel to different places in comparison with walking to particular places.

Secondly, cars have the ability to automatically accommodate various kinds of topography. When one is travelling to a landscape or going on a picnic in the mountainous areas, only cars could adjust to such topography. Despite the fact that there are vehicles can travel to steep and rocky topography such as motorbike and mountain bike, it takes less effort to travel by car. To be more specific, cars can effortlessly move on different forms of land owing to its special designed wheels and also cut down time.

In conclusion, although lots of people think cars contribute disadvantages to their life, I personally believe cars are one of the most helpful and beneficial vehicles to mankind.