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"Type or record a message you would send to a friend or family member telling them all about what you've been doing recently. Have you done anything to improve your current lifestyle?"
My essay: Hey, Jone. How are you? What's been happening on your end? It's great to hear about your promotion at work. It felt like ages since we last spoke at the graduation ceremony. I've been quite busy at my startup, you know, it's struggling and challenging at the beginning of a startup's progress, but I've enjoyed it, to be honest. Because this is my passion with desire about making more effect on society and making ends meet from that. Since I started my project, I've been feeling more enthusiastic. Apart from that, it's just same old, same old. I'm looking forward to seeing you at the class reunion. If I describe my feelings right now, I suppose I won't able to express how much I miss you.
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Hey, Jone. (That is a strange name, but it may be ok in your country!) How are you? What's been happening on your end? It's great to hear about your promotion at work. It felt (wrong verb form) like ages since we last spoke at the graduation ceremony. I've been quite bus
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