Please review my essay.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The two maps illustrate how the main office in AAA Accountancy has changed after a renovation.

Overall, there has been various alternations with the removal of many rooms at the expense of the additional facilities and equipment.

Previously, the northern side of the main office consisted of three offices and one room, namely accounts, processing, new customers, and lunchroom in order from west to east. While the opposite side included the entrance area with the front desk to the left corner, storage room, payroll, and manager's office. The meeting room was located in the central area between the lunchroom and the manager's office to the eastern. There were three desks, one fax and one copier machine for each office excepted for managers.

The most notable change has currently been the dismantling of processing, new customers, and payroll office to make way for the arrangement of grouped desks, equipment (fax, copier) in the middle open area, and one sofa to the south. Additionally, the accounts office has been replaced by the storage while the entrance area was enlarged with a newly-shaped front desk and two additional sofa sets. apart from no change in the eastern side.

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