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Topic: The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011.

The line graph compares the proportion of Europeans who attended cinema every month over a 12-year period (2000-2011) split by age.

Overall, the 15-24 age group was the highest level of cinemagoers, while the oldest group’s attendance was the lowest. In addition, the greatest increase in cinemagoer levels was recorded for the 15 to 24-year-olds.

In 2000, 15% of people aged 15 to 24 went to cinema, while the figure for the youngest age group was lower, at 10%. The percentage of the 15 to 24-year-olds surged dramatically just over three times in 2015, at about 50%, despite a small drop to 35% in 2008. The figure for the youngest age group fluctuated around 15%, then this figure grew to reach a peak at 35% in 2010 before declining moderately to 30% in 2011.

Turning to two remaining groups, the 25-35 age group’s attendance at cinema increased gradually from about 5% in 2000 to 30% in 2011, equal to that of the youngest age group. Similarly, the oldest age group rose from 1% to just above 10% over the period shown.