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In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, instead of moving out to live independently, many adults who have finished school and landed jobs still choose to live with their parents. Although this can offer certain benefits, I think that the downsides of its are more significant.

One clear merit of having an adult in a family is that they can take care of their parents more frequently. Presumably, with deteriorating health, the old constantly confront with unexpected diseases and other health problems. As an example, if the blood pressure of them elevated or dropped suddenly, then without any immediate help from others, they would suffer seriously. That is to say, having an adult nearby can help old people from dire situations. Furthermore, it seems that, at least in my society, the old often feel that they are putting a burden on their children. Therefore, instead of telling their children, they normally treat their illness by themselves. This might be an explanation for why many pass away without their children noticing.

Nevertheless, the worries about parents’ health conditions can be addressed, if the old are encouraged to attend nursing homes. In fact, in many today nursing homes old people are looked after quite carefully and regularly, since there is a number of well-trained nurses and modern medical technologies. In fact, living with parents too long can exert adverse impacts on adults’ lives. Seemingly, adult’s lives would be supervised and intervened constantly by their parents. And due to the gap generation between adults and their parents, conflicts may imminently arise in the family, which, later on, can weaken the relationships between each member.

In conclusion, I believe that the situation of adult keep living with their parents after they have favorable conditions to live independently, bring more disadvantages than advantages. This is because those adult’s lives would be more stressful.