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Topic: Do you like living in big city or staying in village? Write an essay about 350 words.

My essay:

My friend sometimes asks me: "Do you like living in a big city or staying in village? I know most of people choose to live in a big city to enjoy a convenient and modern life. To me, I love to stay in a small village because of purity, low cost and safety.

Firstly, the village has a lot of trees, so you can be easy to get the fresh air every time in day. Each house always has a big garden, so you can plant fruit trees, vegetables and flowers. Imagining I can enjoy the fresh air while seeing my garden in the morning, I feel very excited. But the big city is not like that. Lack of trees and lots of vehicles are two of the reasons that pollute the city. It is not good for the health of elderly and children.

Secondly, living in a small village is cheaper than a big city. Some people complain that there is not much commodity in the countryside. But today, goods are supplied sufficiently to the countryside thanks to the development of transportation. You can get everything easily with low cost. In contrast to the small village, everything in the big city is very expensive. If you don't have a job with a good salary, you find hard to live in the big city.

Lastly, you can see a lot of traffic jams in major cities every time. I feel very tired when I am stuck in a traffic jam for many hours. But in a small village, you rarely see it.

In conclusion, living in a small village is my big dream. Although my job makes me to live in the big city, I sometimes visit the countryside to relax and forget my worry about works. If you try to go to a small village, you can feel it as me.