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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think it is more beneficial to resign oneself to negative circumstances, such as being stuck in a job they are not content with or lacking money. Others feel it is better to try and change these situations for the better. My view is that each person has different approaches to their problems, depending on their situations.

Presumably, those who are from humble backgrounds and are the breadwinners of families usually choose to put up with bad situations. One primary reason is that suppose their endeavor to improve the situation turns out to be a failure, it would put more pressure on their families. These people, although they may dissatisfy with their jobs, they tend to accept that. This is because if they complaint or do something wrong, they would be fired and therefore be unable to support their families. Additionally, people who accept the situation of lacking money might obsessively believe in fate. Therefore, if their fate means being poor forever, they are still willing to accept that.

Others, however, think that at least people should attempt to improve their situations. One possible explanation for this is that if people do not proactively solve their problems, they can suffer from dire consequences. For example, working in a very stressful environment or lacking money can lead ones to various problems, which would adversely affect their personal lives. As an example, it is quite common to see people who have work-related or money problems return home and vent their pent-up frustration on their families. This results in conflicts in the family and weakens the tie between each member.

In conclusion, while some believe that people should accept negative situations, others feel it is better to make an effort to improve the situations. I personally believe some unlucky people may have no choices other than to put up with their situations. However, if people have opportunities it is more sensible to try and address their problems.