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Describe a family member you spend most of the time with.

Well, actually I barely have time with my family. You see, after graduating from high school, I went to college, which is in a different province. Fortunately, since it’s not really far from my hometown, my family usually visits me every two weeks. But I think it’s still not enough. Little by little, the bond between me and my family seems not as strong as it used to be.

However, everything has changed, due to the corona-virus, I was forced to stay at home, and this was actually the time that I got to foster the relationship with my family. I spent most of my time with my little brother since my parents still needed to work, and they often came home pretty late. So I’m in charge of teaching and cooking breakfast for my brother. He is really endearing with an oval face, wavy hair, a fair complexion, and sparkling eyes. And one thing that I just have noticed is that he is really sensitive, so raising him is not an easy task.

But, on the other hand, he’s really insightful, caring, and empathetic. One time, when my father had problems at work, he went home, feeling a bit down in the dumps. You know, the thing is my father is not a type of talkative person, whenever he has problems, he just tries to bottle up his feelings and vent his anger and frustration by taking care of livestock, building something, or playing tennis. So It kind of hard to understand his state of mind, well my brother can sense it. He can console him by just doing little things such as just asking questions like “ how’s your day” and “why you look so sad”, which is the reason why my dad and my mom love him a lot.