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Tran Tung Dang Posted 6 years ago
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Some people say that in all levels of education, students should be taught more about practical skills than theories and facts. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel that students from all educational stages should be taught more about life skills than theoretical facts. From my perspective, I completely agree with this because it helps them to avoid being stuck in troubles and be more successful when they get their future jobs.

First of all, it seems that students without any basic life skills commonly have workplace problems after graduating. To be more specific, it is quite common to see many fresh college graduates do not understand the common etiquette in a professional setting. For instance, my relative is very creative and always full of vitality. He usually implements his ideas without asking coworkers' opinions, which makes everyone in the workplace see him as a reckless and pompous person, thereby he has not been given promotion.

On the other hand, I believe that students who are taught about practical skills at schools will manage to work more effectively. Thus, they would accomplish more results and be more successful. As an example, in Vietnam, students are generally inept when it comes to soft skills. This is because they are not taught very little about those skills at schools, which is why when working for international companies, Vietnamese workers are frequently given criticisms whenever they give a presentation or work in a group. By contrast, their colleagues who were given a different education usually make good impressions at work and thus they are more successful.

In conclusion, I totally agree with the notion that students should be taught more about practical skills at schools this is because it helps them to avoid unnecessary problems as well as achieve more positive results at work.


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I edited my essay a bit please give your feedback on this essay. Some people say that in all levels of education, students should be taught more about practical skills than theories and facts. Do you agree or disagree?

  • I edited my essay a bit please give your feedback on this essay.
  • Some people say that in all levels of education, students should be taught more about practical skills than theories and facts.
  • Do you agree or disagree?
  • Some people feel that students from all educational stages should be taught more about life skills than theoretical facts.
  • From my perspective, I completely agree with this because it helps them to avoid being stuck in troubles and be more successful when they get their future jobs.
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I edited my essay a bit please give your feedback on this essay.

Some people say that in all levels of education, students should be taught more about practical skills than theories and facts. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel that students from all educational stages should be taught more about life skills than theoretical facts. From my perspective, I completely

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