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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

In daily routine life of human being, many sort of music is experienced in a country and in the globe. Music is solution of stress and known for its valuable feature of handling the tension and mental stress. Despite the variety in music, the traditional music is preferred over International music. This essay reflects the importance of music and the choice of traditional music over International music.

To start with, music is a phenomena, concept, and science or magic whatever is pronounced, is short for it. It is difficult to start and tell the benefit and miracle of music. First of all, it is pre-determined that music helps the individual to release tension and mental stress. This how it helps to oneself to rejuvenate by listening it. Moreover, music is the medium of livelihood for many people. Even this is an industry in every country. This how, least but not last, it helps to grow cultural harmony between people of many nations. And this is the same International music is doing.

Spreading the branches of music among nations help to grow peace, health and harmony and ultimately the growth in their economy. International music has crossed the boundaries of popularity among the nation and shining in the globe. Michel Jackson, Taylor Swift and Madona are few name in ocean of music who have made the people their followers. However, Traditional music diminishes the effect of International music. For example the India Bollywood old music is based on classical music. The music and the combination of lyrics makes the listener to follow them regardless to age, whether they are the children or the adults. Thus, despite of huge popularity of international music and choice of people for international music cannot bring any impact on lovers of traditional music.

The reason is the language which helps the countrymen to love traditional music and more than 80% of listener can understand only the country’s native language. Therefore, traditional music would always be the choice of people for any national over International music.