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The graph indicates the proportion of smoking in men and women in Someland between 1906 and 2000. The unit is the numbers of smoking in men and woman in per 1000 people.
Over all, in 1960 the rates of smoking in men higher much more than in women( 600 and 100) but 40 years later the value nearly the same in both( more than 200).
From 1960 to 1975, there were 600 men in every 1000 smoking and the figure declined gradually to 500 in 1975. In contrast, the figure of woman smoking increased sharply less than 100 to about 300 in every 1000 between 1960 and 1975.
From 1975 to 2000,the rates of smoking in both men and woman was in a downward trend. In 1980, every 1000 people had about 560 men smoking and for woman the figure was more than 300. However, the rates of smoking declined gradually to 200 in woman and 250 in men in 2000.
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) and 2000. The unit is the numbers of smoking in men and woman in (wrong description) per 1000 people. Over all, in 1960 the rates of smoking in men higher much more (wrong phrasing) than in women( 600 and 100) but 40 years later the value (missing word) nearly the same in bo th( more than 200).
- ) and 2000.
- The unit is the numbers of smoking in men and woman in (wrong description) per 1000 people.
- Over all, in 1960 the rates of smoking in men higher much more (wrong phrasing) than in women( 600 and 100) but 40 years later the value (missing word) nearly the same in bo th( more than 200).
- From 1960 to 1975, there were 600 men in every 1000 smoking (wrong description) and the figure number declined gradually to 500 in 1975.
- In contrast, the figure number of woman smoking increased sharply (missing word) less than 100 to about 300 in every 1000 between 1960 and 1975.
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The graph indicates the proportion of smoking (wrong description) in men and women in Someland between 1906 (??) and 2000. The unit is the numbers of smoking in men and woman in (wrong description) per 1000 people.
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